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Rating: NC-17
Pairing: Brian/Justin, duh. ;)
Spoilers: S1-S4
Author's Notes: So, I started this fic the very night that episode 402
aired. I posted a bit of it that night, then decided to write more. I've never
felt like this fic entirely gelled. I opened it this morning while waiting to
go to the doctor and decided that I was going to add scenes, or whatever, to
make it work. But, reading it over, while I'm still pretty sure that the entire
fic as a whole really isn't my best work, I also don't know exactly what it
needs to get there.
I had someone do a good beta, and they suggested that the problem lay in the
lack of anything really happening, or any character growth, etc. I agree.
I just don't know exactly what to do with the thing, and some very large part
of me has pretty much decided that this fic is just over. For one thing, the
Hunter characterization is way off at this point given the way he developed
through S4.
This fic was destined to just languish on my harddrive because I couldn't find
my way to finish it, and as always happens with fic, the more time that passes
between the inspiration and the completion, the less likely it is to ever be
finished, or to finish well. So, I am choosing to post it as is--I mean, there
is an ending, it just isn't the best all around story I've ever written. (Assuming
my internet connection works with me for a few flipping minutes. Again, if I
don't reply to the comments, emails, you may leave, it isn't that I'm ignoring
you, or am ungrateful, but that until Thursday my internet connection is iffy
at best.)
Suggestions for improvement are more than welcome. If someone gives me a
brilliant idea to make this thing come together, then I'll happily execute it.
Otherwise, this is finished, I suppose.